The story overview has been written up now. It's posted on google groups and the team seems to approve.
Story OverviewLife back homeLife is lonely. Once a normal and happy kid, you have since become introverted and feel a disconnect from others around you. This was brought on by your mother’s Fatal Tragedy from a couple of years ago. Before this time, you and your mother and father lived happily in the heart of town. Your father made hot air balloons and took you for rides on the weekends. These are the happiest memories you have, flying high in the sky, together as a family. Since then, you and your father live on a hill, on the edge of the town, peering down on it. You spend many lonely nights looking at the town lit up, emitting a glowing sense of warmth and togetherness. Barely holding himself together, your father spends most of his time working in his workshop, doing nothing in particular. The great big hot air balloon that once took you high over the town, and instilled a complete sense of joy, now sits growing dirty and unloved in the backyard. One day while falling asleep inside the balloon’s basket, it mysteriously takes off. This is where your journey begins.
Beginning of the gameThe game starts with you hurtling through the clouds in a hot air balloon, before suddenly finding yourself heading straight into a floating island. Woah! Hitting a cliff, the balloon topples over, sending you perilously towards the ground at an alarming rate. Scared for your life, you wish you could fly. And you can! You take control of the player as you realise you can fly freely, just before certain death. Narrowly alluding death, you settle on the ground as witnesses to the event gather around you. They are startled, but quickly resume their own lives and only mumble vacantly at your attempts to communicate with them. All but one cute little girl, about the same age as you, who takes shy notice of you.
The Great Island in the SkyThe Great Island in the Sky used to be as large as a boys imagination. At the center was one giant town where everyone was happy, and life was perfect. However, some time ago, the people started to become introverted and anti-social. No one knows what caused this. Opting to keep to themselves and communicating only when necessary, the town began getting lonely with townsfolk drifting through wordlessly. As the people drifted apart, so did the The Great Island in the Sky, splitting in four. Far too self-absorbed and introspective, no one noticed this occurring. Before too long, it was too late. By the time people took notice, the islands were already too far apart. People had been emotionally isolated for so long, they no longer knew how to function in a social environment.
The world is an allegory for your life back home, a mirror to your emotions. As an outsider, people take notice of you, particularly a 12 year old girl. They also take notice of you, because as it turns out, you can fly! Because you are also so emotionally distant since your mother died, you struggle to try and talk to this girl and the people on the first island. Slowly your friendship blossoms, and you begin to learn the history of The Great Island in the Sky. You find out that friends and family have been separated and live on different islands. By flying between them, and delivering messages for different people, you slowly bring back the islands together. This is the goal of the game, restore the world to how it once was, and bring back happiness to all. Helping the people of the town come together, gives you the sense of togetherness you have sorely missed. By helping them, you help yourself. They are you.
CharactersMain Boy: 12 years old, melancholy and lonely. Feels isolated and disconnected from the world around him.
Main Girl: 12 years old, shy and cute love interest for the main boy.
Kooky old dude: Works as a father figure for the boy, he runs a workshop
